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Griker- 05-08-2008
Poem
The moon is blue The blood is red The weapons are sharp And the soil is wet The corpses are rotten Stench in the air Weapons lying scattered They were not prepared The foe now are gone The carrion feeds Tracks leading south Tracks from their steeds Fiery horses With flaming eyes Coldblooded lizards Fierce, not wise Steeds of warriors With staffs, hammers and swords In plate and chain Robes and magical wards On every warrior Two I’s engraved In armor or weapon With terror enslaved Invicto was they called Incarnate was their name Followers of chaos War was their game To war they rode Killed without regret With no mercy They slayed every threat So always remember my child At night, lock your door Or they without doubt will come And leave blood and gore

Slagnadz- 05-09-2008

Roses are Red Violets are Blue I'll Fuck you with a Rake

The Sherbet- 05-09-2008

lol must admit i prefer the first one :P awesome job Griker

Ragnarok- 05-09-2008

yeah I think Griker's version is better

Peterjakk- 05-09-2008

Where did that thing come from???

The Sherbet- 05-09-2008
Re: Poem
The moon is blue The blood is red The weapons are sharp And the soil is wet The corpses are rotten Stench in the air Weapons lying scattered They were not prepared The foes now are gone The carrion feeds Tracks leading south Tracks from their steeds Fiery horses With flaming eyes Coldblooded lizards Fierce, not wise Steeds of warriors With staffs, hammers and swords In plate and chain Robes and magical wards On every warrior Two I’s engraved In armor or weapon With terror enslaved Invicto were they called Incarnate was their name Followers of chaos WAR was their game To WAR they rode Killed without regret With no mercy They slayed every threat So always remember my child At night, lock your door Or without doubt they will come And leave blood and gore Just a few adjustments to make it flow better in my opinion.

Griker- 05-09-2008

Mmmhmm rake se.. NO WAIT A MIN!!! LOLOL U RAPE ME!?

Griker- 05-09-2008

Gz sherbert. You catched the double meaning in WAR was their game

Malifact- 07-10-2008

The past tense of slay is 'slew' not slayed. *Flykick to the face* But that was a rather meaty piece of poem thar, Grikinator. Well done.

Bru- 07-10-2008

Indeed, a job well done. =)

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