Poem The moon is blue
The blood is red
The weapons are sharp
And the soil is wet
The corpses are rotten
Stench in the air
Weapons lying scattered
They were not prepared
The foe now are gone
The carrion feeds
Tracks leading south
Tracks from their steeds
Fiery horses
With flaming eyes
Coldblooded lizards
Fierce, not wise
Steeds of warriors
With staffs, hammers and swords
In plate and chain
Robes and magical wards
On every warrior
Two I’s engraved
In armor or weapon
With terror enslaved
Invicto was they called
Incarnate was their name
Followers of chaos
War was their game
To war they rode
Killed without regret
With no mercy
They slayed every threat
So always remember my child
At night, lock your door
Or they without doubt will come
And leave blood and gore
Slagnadz- 05-09-2008
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
I'll Fuck you with a Rake
The Sherbet- 05-09-2008
lol must admit i prefer the first one :P
awesome job Griker
Ragnarok- 05-09-2008
yeah I think Griker's version is better
Peterjakk- 05-09-2008
Where did that thing come from???
The Sherbet- 05-09-2008
Re: Poem The moon is blue
The blood is red
The weapons are sharp
And the soil is wet
The corpses are rotten
Stench in the air
Weapons lying scattered
They were not prepared
The foes now are gone
The carrion feeds
Tracks leading south
Tracks from their steeds
Fiery horses
With flaming eyes
Coldblooded lizards
Fierce, not wise
Steeds of warriors
With staffs, hammers and swords
In plate and chain
Robes and magical wards
On every warrior
Two I’s engraved
In armor or weapon
With terror enslaved
Invicto were they called
Incarnate was their name
Followers of chaos
WAR was their game
To WAR they rode
Killed without regret
With no mercy
They slayed every threat
So always remember my child
At night, lock your door
Or without doubt they will come
And leave blood and gore
Just a few adjustments to make it flow better in my opinion.
Griker- 05-09-2008
Mmmhmm rake se.. NO WAIT A MIN!!!
LOLOL U RAPE ME!?
Griker- 05-09-2008
Gz sherbert. You catched the double meaning in
WAR was their game
Malifact- 07-10-2008
The past tense of slay is 'slew' not slayed. *Flykick to the face*
But that was a rather meaty piece of poem thar, Grikinator. Well done.
Bru- 07-10-2008
Indeed, a job well done. =)
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